My GTA V review

So I wrote a review on this gaming website for GTA V. It's done by three of us, and its done like a conversation.

What do you guys think?

http://www.illgaming.in/2013/09/grand-theft-auto-v-the-ill-trio-review/

BUMP

Come on guys, really value the opinion around here. Some thoughts maybe?

 

That's a lot of reading (but whatever, I'm at work :thumbsup: ).

I think it is nice to read a review that focuses more on the actual game/story than simply graphics and FPS drops. I'm not sure how to write this but it seems that you described the story, missions, people etc. without actually telling everything - I mean, you didn't include any spoilers even though you dug pretty deep into the game. That is great! I wanted to buy the game in the first place, but your review has tempted me even more to buy the PS3 version instead of waiting for PC.

Good job

 

I think I find it a little distasteful that you're bumping your own thread pimping your own gaming site.

 

I started reading it, but it seems fragmented, and needs better editing. I don't know if this is a translation, or what, I am just judging what I see. And what I saw was things that didn't make sense, words that were missing, it just felt like a google translate. Which I would read for technical information. But this was too long for that. It was just too hard to read and wasn't a nice easy read. So I wasn't able to read it all. I do like the agree/disagree that more than one reviewer offers.

My suggestion, find a good editor for English. Also shorten it down, trim the fat. Also, try to organize the review. This seemed more like free flow thoughts, i.e. what ever came to mind.

If English is not your first language, then props to you as I know how hard learning English can be. It is my first language, and I am still learning.